Haiku
#1
Posted 05 May 2003 - 02:10 PM
I just finished up a 15 page poetry paper and the main topic of the paper were Haiku's
So anyway i thought it would be a fun, funny little topic if you can post a Haiku of your own (this was on South Park once)
"Philly whats a Haiku?"
Good question
a Haiku is a old Japanese form of poetry that is 17 syllables. traditionally 5 syllables for the first line 7 for the second and 5 for the last
heres an example
muscle collecting (5)
is a fun hobby for you (7)
you should try it now (5)
usually Haiku's make up more of an image then anything else
but no ones getting graded here so just post what ya like lol
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#2
Posted 05 May 2003 - 02:13 PM
i like to watch them all drown
and drink lemonade.
how's that?
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#3
Posted 05 May 2003 - 02:17 PM
just thought of another one it is inspired by my hero Doc Moore
doc moore fell to the (5)
floor assuming the fetal (7)
pose hilarious (5)
lol these wont be in any textbooks but there still pretty cool
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#4
Posted 05 May 2003 - 02:27 PM
i wish hell on kids.
they should all drink turpentine.
that would make me smile.
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#5
Posted 05 May 2003 - 03:03 PM
I would think that Ironmask (7)
Does daycare daily (5)
#6
Posted 05 May 2003 - 03:07 PM
The wind is blowing
and the sun is setting down
shining stars appears
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#7
Posted 05 May 2003 - 03:09 PM
in the place where it snows and 7
I need a heater! 5
#8
Posted 05 May 2003 - 03:15 PM
as the full moon is rising
very peacefully
i havent write haiku for awhile....
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#9
Posted 05 May 2003 - 03:22 PM
gently on your warm kindness face
which make you shiver
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#10
Posted 05 May 2003 - 03:43 PM
as if hell was torn open
swiftly burns all lifes
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#12
Posted 05 May 2003 - 04:16 PM
spread the sadness all the land
as if someone died
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#13
Posted 05 May 2003 - 05:55 PM
the butterfly flew
into the air of nowhere
kindly greets others
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#14
Posted 05 May 2003 - 07:14 PM
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#15
Posted 05 May 2003 - 07:25 PM
Thats not all trueactually Haiku is suppose to be about the nature... anything about the nature...
lol i just finished a 15 page research paper about Haiku's I now know to much about it
For a traditional Haiku at least one word has to be a kigo which is a word that represents a season
its not always easy to see the connection
but more modern Haiku's can be about anything and the 17 syll. rule can even be thrown out
and if your really good you can write a Tanka which is a 31 syll. Japanese poem that usually has to do with humor in the family (traditionally)
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#16
Posted 05 May 2003 - 07:46 PM
You can never go back home
The place where you lie
#17
Posted 05 May 2003 - 07:55 PM
you stupid football player
give me your girlfriend
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#21
Posted 05 May 2003 - 08:45 PM
sound like broken translated
Japanese haikus
are you sure that you
wrote those and not some guy from
japan, translated?
Because they sound like
Japanese translated with
Babelfish, online.
#23
Posted 05 May 2003 - 09:02 PM
Can get you thrown out of school
For Plagiarism
Plagiarism is
what you call something when you
steal someone's work Chib
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#24
Posted 05 May 2003 - 09:09 PM
They come in ten cool colors
I want all of them
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#25
Posted 05 May 2003 - 09:12 PM
Isn't cool,if you do this
You'll look like a fool