Somehow you made the puns work...though somehow I would have kept the "Yamamotoyama" bit since it was also done in "Konjiki no Gash!" as is. (Heh, Mayatomomaya...)
I actually did a draft that kept the last joke intact, since I was having a hard time coming up with an English equivalent. The long translation note kind of broke up the flow of the "Kinnikman makes a wrong answer and everything goes to hell" last page, so I ended up replacing it with the only purely-phonic palindrome I could think of at the time. (while searching for a better one on Google, I also discovered "Kinnikinnik" is the longest palindromic word in the English language, which greatly amused me)
The whole Stupid Space Arc: (read at your own risk)
Chapter 86: I get that it's a Seven Samurai parody, and Kinnikuman is supposed to be Kikuchiyo, but Terryman and Ramenman suddenly hating him for no reason seems a bit odd, considering they love the guy just a few chapters ago...
http://www.megalopuad.coc/?d=B3K67SL6Chapter 87: Kinnikuman, a cowboy, a martial artist, a kid, a nazi, a crystal being, and a potato team up to fight galactic samurai. God this arc is weird.
http://www.megalopuad.coc/?d=W068I22BChapter 88: What the hell was the point of this chapter? You know what? Don't read this chapter. Heck, skip this whole bloody arc if you can.
http://www.megalopuad.coc/?d=HMTGTS3RChapter 89: ...that's it?
http://www.megalopuad.coc/?d=HXVJ8J90Don't worry, I know nobody's actually reading these chapters. They're just watching this topic until the main event. >_>
Okay, I just re-read the Warsman arc, so now I can move on to editing the last chapter. Knuxie, be very careful that you fix the numbering and add a placeholder for that chapter in volume 9 before you upload these chapters, or OneManga will use the numbers currently listed on that site.
Edited by fuzzbuster, 24 January 2012 - 09:50 AM.