Fan Character Techniques
#51
Posted 27 April 2007 - 04:12 PM
After surviving the fall, Darkman goes into hiding for a couple of months to heal. He learns that Kinnikuman has come to Earth on business and goes to visit him, but when he gets to Kinnikuman’s hotel room he finds only Robin Mask (Kinnikuman had ate too many gyuudon, so he was busy on the toilet). Darkman tells Robin that he accepts Kinnikuman’s invitation to join the Idol Choujin, but wishes to be restricted to his native New Zealand. He says that he requests this because he wants to atone for his sins (turning on the Seigi Choujins, creating Kyoudo stealing devices, etc). He asks that Robin only tell Kinnikuman of his visit and request and then leaves.
Darkman returns to New Zealand and instantly becomes their #1 hero. When he’s not fighting Akuma and Zangyaku Choujins, he is working at his self-managed youth center. Known there as Aniki (big bro), he teaches the kids how to wrestle, swim, play baseball, and of course, cook their own yakitori. As the years go on, Darkman’s rubbery muscles start to harden and he loses most of his stretching abilities. He is still in great shape and is still quite flexible (and still short). He also acquires a student in the young boy Jonas, whom he begins to see as the son he never had. Jonas is very skilled but has a very low Kyoudo (700,000 Power), so Darkman teaches him some alchemy in order to even out is performance. Unfortunately, having to rely on alchemy all the time makes Jonas feel inferior, and by the time he’s 18 he finds Darkman’s old Kyoudo stealing recipes and runs away. Feeling responsible, Darkman tracks down Jonas and discovers that he has started his own league of Zangyaku Choujin. After viewing the Choujin Olympics: The Resurrection, he desires to take Rinko as his wife, promising Keiko and Tamaki to his two strongest minions. Darkman tries to stop them from leaving New Zealand but is defeated by his former student.
In “OMIAI!! The Three Princesses!” (fan-manga 6 of 7 and 2nd Nisei manga), Darkman anonymously tips off the Idols to the location of Jonas and his team. When they (Mantarou, Meat, Kevin, Kid, Jade, Seiuchin, Barrier, Ilioukhine, Fiona, and guardian Geronimo) arrive in New Zealand, they are greeted by Darkman (who also guides them). Darkman ends up having to fight one Jonas’ minions, an unnamed Christianity Choujin. The bad guys keeps getting the upper hand on Darkman and thanking God for the power to do so, prompting Darkman to give a speech on how Choujins make their own luck and must always rely on their own power as well as the power of Friendship. It is then that Darkman finally realizes that the moment his friends forgave him and the second he felt remorse, he had already atoned for his sins, and that it was time to stop feeling sorry for himself. He eventually finds the strength to defeat the bad guy with an as-of-yet undeveloped brand new technique.
I haven’t written this far into it yet, but my plan is for Darkman to for some reason have to sacrifice half of his Kyoudo in order to help Mantarou defeat Jonas. At the end of the story, Darkman is shown saying goodbye to the kids at his youth center, as it’s time for him to go where he is most needed: The Hercules Factory. Before he leaves however, Jonas shows up. Mantarou are cautious, but Jonas then bows down and begs forgiveness from Darkman. Darkman can see that Jonas truly feels bad, so he tells him not to worry about and instead take care of the youth center for him.
In the as-of-yet untitled final fan-manga, you learn that Darkman has become one of the top trainers at the Hercules Factory. He is sent on a mission with Robin Mask and Ramenman to save the kidnapped Kinniku Brothers (Suguru and Ataru), but they themselves are defeated and imprisoned. Darkman doesn’t do much else until the very end (and that’s a secret), but Jonas does show up to help the New Generation with the second Rescue Mission.
Gouri Daisuke, 1952~2010
"Washi ga Otokojuku jukuchou... Edajima Heihachi de aru!!!!!"
#52
Posted 28 April 2007 - 08:28 AM
"Gai's Kinniku Clan Favourite Phrase"
"Technique transcends the soul, Begins in the Hands, Ends on the Mat"
#53
Posted 28 April 2007 - 10:04 AM
#54
Posted 29 April 2007 - 09:58 AM
yours guy kinniku.
"Gai's Kinniku Clan Favourite Phrase"
"Technique transcends the soul, Begins in the Hands, Ends on the Mat"
#55
Posted 01 May 2007 - 01:12 AM
First, Diceman throws his head (That is a dice.) and depending on the number, he does a submission. But if its number 6, he first does 6 submissions that breaks all bones in the oponents body and then he splits up into 6 Dicemans, the first 4 uses some attacks (That I havent decided) and the last two does the triangle dreamer (One of Satan crosses attacks.) then they turn into one Diceman again, who slams the oponent down into the ground with the sharp edge of the dice.
#56
Posted 02 May 2007 - 10:11 AM
Edited by guy kinniku, 02 May 2007 - 10:12 AM.
"Gai's Kinniku Clan Favourite Phrase"
"Technique transcends the soul, Begins in the Hands, Ends on the Mat"
#57
Posted 11 May 2007 - 09:04 PM
Name: Raggedyman (US Name: Raggedy Anthony)
Homeland: Denmark
Height: 5'4"
Weight: 132 lbs.
Age: 14
Classification: Justice Choujin
Choujin Kyodou: 80,000,000
Attacks: Slingshot, Raggedy-Plex, Candy Heart Attack, Flexibility, Headscissor takedown, Raggedy Basher, Ragdoll Smash, Ragdoll Twist (similar to Tajiri's Tarantula move on the ropes), Raggedy Driver
Finishing Move: Raggedy Screwdriver (Raggedyman launches his opponent to the air and proceeds to place his opponent in the headscissor takedown. With his ragdoll body, he twists himself while doing so and spins himself and his opponent until he releases them onto the canvas.)
Story: Raggedyman was born in Denmark a small boy, but was made fun of a lot for his flexible ragdoll like body. His father then sent him over to America to learn self defense. It was then that he would be brought in by Terryman and his family, thus being friends with Terry the Kid (Terry "The Grand" Kenyon). Throughout their childhood, they became friends as well as another trainee, the Matenrou (Sly Scraper). Years passed as they later trained at the Hercules Factory. So far, Raggedyman has been stationed in his homeland, but awaits the day when he can reunite with his old friend from Texas.
Personality: Kind, caring, but at times a little gullible and confused.
Hope you like him,
Anthony "A-Log" LoGatto
#58
Posted 11 May 2007 - 10:31 PM
Name: Red Wolf
Classification: Seigi Choujin
Age: 19
Height: 187 cm
Weight: 106 kg
Choujin Kyoudo: 1,230,000 Power
Trademark Techniques
Choujin Kyoudo Manipulation - Red Wolf's main attack where he uses his Kyoudo to alter his body parts into weapons. However, he can only do it with his left arm (tomohawk) and his right leg (hunting knife).
Fall of the Great Sioux Nation - A variation of the Kinniku Buster, it starts out as a front-facing jawbreaker (a.k.a. Stone Cold Stunner), but when Red Wolf jumps up he flaps his opponent's body so that their legs are over their head. With his opponent's chin still on his shoulder, Red Wolf grabs their ankles and drops down.
Last of the Mohicans - A Pearl River Plunge with a different name.
Navajo Retribution - Red Wolf performs a Texas Clover Hold on his opponent but then begins to elevate their body and shifts his knee into their back (a la Chris Jericho's Lion Tamer/Walls of Jericho). He then uses his right leg to clamp onto and hold the opponent's left arm still.
Apache Driver - With his opponent falling upside down towards the ring, Red Wolf jumps up after them, gets behind them, grabs onto their knees, grabs their head with his own knees, and drives them into the canvas.
The last four techniques are actually first used in my last two G1 fan-mangas by Red Wolf's father... Geronimo.
Story
Red Wolf was born as Gerosuke to Geronimo and Yuuko Minakumo during the former's Hawaiian Champion Tour. He spends most of his childhood in Hawaii and refers to Geronimo as Makuakane (Hawaiian for "father"). However, when his mother is killed by Akugyo Choujins Geronimo gives up his title and they return to Oklahoma, where Gerosuke vows to become the greatest Seigi Choujin ever. As he gets older, Gerosuke learns of his father's numerous losses and begins to view him as weak. He takes off on his own and becomes Red Wolf. He also forms a team of other Native American Choujin and teaches them how to use Choujin Kyoudo Manipulation. Dubbing themselves Red Justice, they set out to prve that Seigi Choujins should not be weak like Geronimo.
They interrupt the Passage to Manhood ceremony Geronimo and his tribe were holding for Mantarou, Terry the Kid, Seiuchin, and Gazelleman (in honor of their recent victories over the d.M.p and the Nightmares) and challenge them to prove who is stronger. During his fight with Mantarou, Mantarou's performance finally convinces Red Wolf that it is not the Win/Loss Record that makes Seigi Choujin a great, it is their overall performance in the ring. Mantarou eventually defeats him with a Kinniku Driver and ultimately he reconciles with his father and befreinds the New Generation.
He appears again in my second Nisei manga, y'know, the one with Darkman and Jonas and New Zealand and all that. His father Geronimo had gone along with the New Generation as a guardian, but when they reach Joans' lair, Geronimo volunteers to distract the Limestone Rock Choujin guard (no name yet, sorry). After awhile of fighting, Geronimo is almost done in, but then Red Wolf arrives and saves him. After a short but rough fight, Red Wolf defeats the bad guy with the Fall of the Great Sioux Nation. He is later seen along with the rest of the cast (minus the dead baddies of course) during Mantarou's fight against Jonas.
Not much has been written yet, but Red Wolf will be featured alongside Mantarou, Kevin Mask, Chaos, Terry the Kid, Jade, Jonas, and a new character as the main charaters of my final Nisei manga "Final Chapter!! The Kinniku Clan is Forever!". My plan is for his opponent to be someone who completely mastered the Choujin Kyoudo Manipulation technique.
That's all for now, any thoughts?
Gouri Daisuke, 1952~2010
"Washi ga Otokojuku jukuchou... Edajima Heihachi de aru!!!!!"
#59
Posted 11 May 2007 - 11:42 PM
Name: Warai
Homeland: Japan
Age: 15
Classification: Seigi Chojin
Bio: A boy who grew up in the slums, he was beaten constantly by so-called "tough guys". Despite all this, he remained smiling, as he thought it'd get them to stop someday. One day, he returned home, to find his family slaughtered. He then, in time, made it to the Hercules Factory, and trained to become a Justice Chojin. Though he's always smiling, he still bears the pain of his torment and the death of his family deep inside...
Techniques
Full Nelson Suplex: Gets them in a Full Nelson, then performs a suplex.
Triangle Hold Suplex: Same as above, but holding their neck and arm in a Triangle Hold.
The Heavenly Cross: Slams them to the ground, and while they're still dazed, jumps as high as he can, puts his arms in a cross shape, and lands it on their neck, joints, etc.
I decided to draw a picture of him. Though, I don't think his appearance would be well-recieved here...
In case he looks or sounds familiar...I just got done watching Rurouni Kenshin, episodes 55 and 56, so his appearance and attitude resemble that of Sojiro. Just thought I'd create a character that's NOT a stereotypical "token badass"...
Edit: He's also known to ocassionally say "Oro?!" when hit or confused, and repeat the same sentence twice (or how do you describe it...he talks like "I'm happy, that I am.")
Edited by Checkmate1989, 12 May 2007 - 12:02 AM.
HEART OF THE SWORD
#60
Posted 12 May 2007 - 01:21 AM
Name: Alastor
Age: 17
Homeland: America
Classification: Seigi Chojin
Bio: A teenage boy who was constantly ridiculed in school for his appearance (he was labeled a "weak-minded prettyboy), he entered the Hercules Factory in hopes that he'd get stronger. Upon returning, he was attacked in an alley. Because of the pent-up rage from being teased in school, he changed to a "crazed madman" psyche, severely injuring his attackers. This became a problem, as he'd sometimes snap and lash out at people. In time, he was able to surpress this, but he'll still occasionally snap when enraged...
Ummmmm...could someone help me think up techniques? I'm no good at this.
HEART OF THE SWORD
#61
Posted 12 May 2007 - 04:13 AM
I do have a really good villain made, though, but I'll post info and a pic of Mirrorman later.
AND THE MAN IN THE BACK SAID EVERYONE ATTACK AND IT TURNED INTO A BALLROOM BLITZ!
#62
Posted 13 May 2007 - 08:58 PM
Age: 18
Classification: Akuma Chojin
Homeland: Italy
Abilities: Telekinesis, telepathy
Techniques: Guillotine Drop, Psy-Blades
Appearance:
Bio: Born to a rich family in Italy, Nero was living a privelaged life, until he inadverdantly wiped out his entire block, and everyone on it, with a psychic blast. It was then that he discovered he had powerful psychic abilities. He decided to use his powers for evil, turning to a life of supervillainy...
Edited by Checkmate1989, 18 May 2007 - 07:18 AM.
HEART OF THE SWORD
#63
Posted 31 May 2007 - 07:11 PM
#64
Posted 01 June 2007 - 10:17 AM
Name: Jaguar Muscle
Homeland: Mexico
Height: 6'1"
Weight: 220 lbs.
Age: 16(although he was born right before the battle for the throne)
Classification: Founder of the C.X.F.(Chojin Extermanation Force)
Choujin Kyodou: 100,000 (25,000,000 in Jaguar form) [30,000,000 in true identity]
Attacks: ??? no one seen him wrestle [Has Kid Bison and Lomeinman due his dirty work]
Finishing Move: ??? (assumed to be a normal Muscle Buster)
Story: He claims to be the son of Mariposa Muscle but is too young to be true....... He also claims that the Kinnikuman Throne is rightfully his. He has several artifacts that belong to the Royal Family to proove this, including a Royal mask which he added Jaguar paterns to. He challenged both Suguru and Mantarou and neither accepted....... but the son of Mantarou has stepped up to fight him and his C.X.F.
Likes: Food(except pork), mud baths, and giving orders.
Dislikes: Mayumi, Mantarou,Suguru, and all Chojins!
#65
Posted 01 June 2007 - 02:08 PM
i eccept all fight the C.X.F kinnikuman 3rdHeres more info on Jaguar Muscle
Name: Jaguar Muscle
Homeland: Mexico
Height: 6'1"
Weight: 220 lbs.
Age: 16(although he was born right before the battle for the throne)
Classification: Founder of the C.X.F.(Chojin Extermanation Force)
Choujin Kyodou: 100,000 (25,000,000 in Jaguar form) [30,000,000 in true identity]
Attacks: ??? no one seen him wrestle [Has Kid Bison and Lomeinman due his dirty work]
Finishing Move: ??? (assumed to be a normal Muscle Buster)
Story: He claims to be the son of Mariposa Muscle but is too young to be true....... He also claims that the Kinnikuman Throne is rightfully his. He has several artifacts that belong to the Royal Family to proove this, including a Royal mask which he added Jaguar paterns to. He challenged both Suguru and Mantarou and neither accepted....... but the son of Mantarou has stepped up to fight him and his C.X.F.
Likes: Food(except pork), mud baths, and giving orders.
Dislikes: Mayumi, Mantarou,Suguru, and all Chojins!
Edited by guy kinniku, 01 June 2007 - 02:09 PM.
"Gai's Kinniku Clan Favourite Phrase"
"Technique transcends the soul, Begins in the Hands, Ends on the Mat"
#66
Posted 06 June 2007 - 11:55 AM
#67
Posted 07 June 2007 - 05:51 AM
Anyway, he has a collection of DVD's and he can change into whatever's on the disk. However, learning from his father's mistake (not updating his Kinnikuman tape), he has movie and cartoon character based disks, rather than Chojins. He can also trap people with his remote eye and burn them onto disk.
I also made one who was a nuclear reactor who wanted revenge on Kinnikuman's family for what happened to him at the Chojin Olympics. He was in the finals, at the match where they had to race around on rollerskates. Kinnikuman, not being able to skate properly, flailed around, knocking him off the side (and taking the Brown Hornet with him... the Brown Hornet naturally used his powers to escape unharmed). Of course, this is because he has a spinning turbine in his body that causes him to lose his stability and fall over unballanced. This is how Kid Muscle defeats him.
I had to put in one joke since he was nuclear... "the first 3 rows might get cancer."